In the ocean the fish
were flapping their fins so fast through the water, shooting like bullets. The
salty sea was splashing up onto the crunchy, golden sand. The coconuts fell
from the trees in the bright blue sky. In the sea it was so shallow because of
the coral reef. When the coral reef ended it was so deep, no one could touch
the bottom of the sea or even dive to the bottom. The fluffy clouds zoom and
float in the sky. The sea is so flat like concrete and so quiet too.
Wow!!! What great descriptive writing Luke. I really enjoyed reading your story. Your all producing some fabulous writing Room 10! Well Done, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have described the island Luke. It made me feel as if I was there. Great writing!
ReplyDeleteFrom Luke's Nana