I land on an
island. I smell rotten fish and salty
water. I can hear snakes slithering in
the bushes and wild pigs charging at each other. I can see sparkly, shiny, bright stars and
juicy coconuts. I can feel spiders
climbing up on me. I can see the trees
swaying side to side and the sun is shining.
The trees are sparkling and the leaves are rustling together. Out of the corner of my eye, I can see a crab
scuttling across the golden sand. I can
see a seal splashing in the water.
SPLASH! He gets all wet and the
sun shines on the seal and it sparkles like a crystal.
Really good descriptive words Dyneka. Keep up the good work. Grandma
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work.kyla
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