I went in my little
raft to an island. It was deserted! I feel salty sea water splashing on my
face. I could hear the trees swaying in
the fiery hot sand. I could taste the
cold shivery wind, blowing in my mouth.
I could see the brown furry coconuts hanging from the trees. Big wild pigs were at the deserted island.
Hi Harrison - I enjoyed reading your writing. I thought the way you used a long sentence and then a short sentence was especially effective at the start of your writing. Mrs Wood :)
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