Thursday, 27 February 2014

THE ISLAND - By Harrison

I went in my little raft to an island.  It was deserted!  I feel salty sea water splashing on my face.  I could hear the trees swaying in the fiery hot sand.  I could taste the cold shivery wind, blowing in my mouth.  I could see the brown furry coconuts hanging from the trees.  Big wild pigs were at the deserted island.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Harrison - I enjoyed reading your writing. I thought the way you used a long sentence and then a short sentence was especially effective at the start of your writing. Mrs Wood :)