Wooosh!! What was that? A pretty red fish, gliding through the air,
like a rainbow. Splash, then it dived
down deep, back into the ocean. As I was
steering my boat, I saw pretty shaped clouds.
They all looked like treasure. I
looked up so high I could nearly grab one.
As I came to a deserted island, I felt the wild wind blowing me over
onto the sand. As I was walking through
the dark forest, I heard the trees swaying side to side like they were talking
to each other. There was a big storm
coming. When the wild wind was blowing,
I heard the big coconuts falling down to the ground. The milk smashed everywhere. When the storm has stopped, I picked up one
of the coconuts, and I drank some of the milk.
I walked down the path. Suddenly
I heard something. I was scared. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a big
snake rustling through the bushes. I
walked back to my boat. I heard the
seagulls squawking at me. As I came
back, I saw the sea shining like crystals.
Wow lucy that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jemma rm 3.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy, I really enjoyed your story. Very descriptive and exciting. Love Daddy
ReplyDeleteGreat story Lucy! what an amazing piece of descriptive writing.
ReplyDeleteLove Mummy x