Thursday, 27 February 2014


Wooosh!!  What was that?  A pretty red fish, gliding through the air, like a rainbow.  Splash, then it dived down deep, back into the ocean.  As I was steering my boat, I saw pretty shaped clouds.  They all looked like treasure.  I looked up so high I could nearly grab one.  As I came to a deserted island, I felt the wild wind blowing me over onto the sand.  As I was walking through the dark forest, I heard the trees swaying side to side like they were talking to each other.  There was a big storm coming.  When the wild wind was blowing, I heard the big coconuts falling down to the ground.  The milk smashed everywhere.  When the storm has stopped, I picked up one of the coconuts, and I drank some of the milk.  I walked down the path.  Suddenly I heard something.  I was scared.  Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a big snake rustling through the bushes.  I walked back to my boat.  I heard the seagulls squawking at me.  As I came back, I saw the sea shining like crystals.


  1. Wow lucy that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jemma rm 3.

  2. Hi Lucy, I really enjoyed your story. Very descriptive and exciting. Love Daddy

  3. Great story Lucy! what an amazing piece of descriptive writing.
    Love Mummy x