I see a deserted island
in the middle of an ocean. The fish are
swimming in the sharp sea. I see the
wavy sea splash against the jagged rocks at the edge of the island. I see the seagulls flying around above the
sea searching for lovely fish. The salty
smell, oh that lovely smell of the deserted sea. The sand sparkles around the island like
dazzling crystals. What is that? In the corner of my eye I saw a fish fly fluently
past me. The trees sway side to side, it
is almost like they’re breathing into my ear.
I see the shimmering sea reflect on the trees like glimmering
diamonds. I look up at the crystal clear
sky. The clouds are shaped like
animals. It is almost like I can grab
one. The tiny yellow grains of sand
sieve through my toes. The brown, hairy,
juicy coconuts are up in the fresh green leaves. Out of the corner of my eye I see a crab
scuttling across the wild, west sand. As
I run across the golden grains they flick up in the air. It is almost like sand can reach like hands
to the animal clouds. The sea is like
white horses charging towards me.
Great use of imagery Holly. I really liked your line "tiny yellow grains of sand sieve through my toes." I can't wait to read more of your writing. Mrs Wood :)
ReplyDeleteHolly wonderful writing, I felt like I could have been in your story. Love Mum
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