The wind blows my long,
sparkling blonde hair, towards the deserted island. I smell the salty seawater. It made me scrunch up my face. It smelt awful. I can hear the pigs snorting. I can hear the waves splashing and wrestling
together. I can smell revolting, rotten
fish. Then suddenly a glittery, silver
fish leapt up high I the sky. The shiny
sun reflected off the fish’s scales. It
looked like a diamond. It came back down
with a gigantic splash. Some water hit
me. It was frost bitten. I felt the sand in between my toes. I could see trees swaying from side to
side. I could hear seagulls
squawking. I can’t wait for the
tremendous adventure coming.
What a wonderful descriptive story Chloe. Well done! Love Mum
ReplyDeletegood work chloe I liked how you said squawking in your work. From Grace
ReplyDeletewow chloe that story is amazing from mya
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