When I sailed to an
island I saw a glittery, sparkly, colourful, amazing flying fish fly over my
face. It shot as fast as a bullet. The island was a triangle shape. When I got closer to the deserted island I
saw snakes rustling in the old, old trees.
Just before I got to the island, heaps of big and little fish jumped up
and over my huge boat, then I arrived at the deserted island. The sand was all over my face. Then I saw a poisonous snake. I couldn’t get to my boat because it had
gotten eaten by the snake. “HELP!” I
cried. I survived by swimming into the
salty sea. Then manta rays came charging
at me. They pulled me under deep, deep,
to the dark bottom of the sea. Then I
kicked them and swam to shore and I was safe.
Harry - that is an awesome story - Dad and Chloe and Fletcher and Emerson loved reading your story - you are very clever
ReplyDeleteHarry - that was an awesome story - Dad and Chloe and Fletcher and Emerson loved reading it - well done
ReplyDeleteHi Harry I liked the way you used the words glittery and sparkly in your writing.
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