Wednesday 22 May 2013

100 WORD CHALLENGE #3 - BY JOSHUA

One day I saw a puppy abandoned.  Left to die with no food or water.  It was alone.  It cried.  The puppy felt mad, sad and lonely.  It was a wee bit big.  Then it saw me.  It had a sad face.  It was in an alley.  It made me feel cross at the person that abandoned that puppy.  It got mad and chased me because it didn't trust me.  I ran to the pet shop and the puppy could not find me anywhere.  Then it died and that was the end of that puppy.  Luckily I did not get hurt.  I was happy because I did not get hurt and I was a wee bit sad because the puppy died.

By Joshua

3 comments:

  1. The 100 word challenge was cool. The writing had lots of description. did you have a picture to start on?
    Ithink Laingholm - Auckland

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  2. I enjoy reading your writing Josh Love Mum.

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  3. Can you tell me what ally means again From Max

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