Saturday, 11 May 2013

100 WORD CHALLENGE # 1 - BY RUSSELL

A cloud of dust rose, as two over grown cats twist and flip, grapple claws and tangle together.  Their ear splitting roars of agony and anger rip savagely through the dusty silence. Their bright dazzling yellow manes wipe and wind messily.  Their eyes glint orange in the dazzling sun.  Their golden paws sail through the dusty air as they battle.  their big bodies twist and bend dangerously daring to snap.  Their faces grimace painfully, but they bravely keep on fighting.  They growl with exhaustion, but they want to merely win.  Their handsome tails swish because they are two handsome lions.

 By Russell
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous16 May 2013 at 14:41

    Hello Russell I really like your describing words like agony and savagely from Caleb .

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  2. Anonymous16 May 2013 at 14:47

    I like how you said their ear spitting roars of agony and anger rip savagely through the dusty silence.
    By Cameron C

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  3. Anonymous16 May 2013 at 14:56

    WOW.. russell that was very amazing I really liked it my favourite bit was when you wrote their ear splitting roars of agony and anger rip savagely through the dusty silence.
    From Sam M

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  4. Room 1016 May 2013 at 14:59

    Wow Russell your story i s amazing. i love the bit where it says dangerously daring to snap it sound brilliant from Amber

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  5. Anonymous19 May 2013 at 17:05

    Russell, you have used amazing description to talk about the lions. You have also effectively used metaphors to 'paint' an interesting picture. We are impressed with your message. Keep up the amazing writing. Room 11

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  6. Anonymous8 July 2013 at 19:25

    I like the start of your story

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