Thursday, 30 May 2013

SNOW DAY


3 comments:

  1. Hi Aliya, good poem about the snow. I liked when you said a shivering feeling runs down my spine like a lighting bolt.

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  2. Hi Aliya, great poem. I liked when you said I can smell the damp snowy grass. From Grace

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  3. I LOVED YOUR STORY ALIYA.I LIKED THE WORED I CAN FEEL THE HAIL BATILING MY COAT IN THE WIND.FROM MYA

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