100 WORD CHALLENGE #1 - BY CAMERON C
Rrrrrrrrrrrr! Two lazy lions frolic on green hard ground as the dust rises up into the windy air. Turning and twisting as their fur silently swirls in the dazzling sun. Their messy golden manes flip and flap over their tar black eyes. Their powerful jaws crash down noisily over their long slippery tongue. Their deadly claws scratch each other as they tumble around the dry, dusty grass. their gingery tummies roll on each other. Sniff goes their sniffy snout smelling the smelly air. They growl with exhaustion but they want to merely win!
By Cam
Hi Cameron. Congratulations on your nicely crafted piece of writing. I especially like, "Their messy golden manes flip and flap over their tar black eyes."
ReplyDeleteWell done. Your writing is really developing.
Mr Newton
WOW. that was a really cool 100 word challenge I like how you wrote the powerful jaw's crash down noisily over their long slippery tongue. From Sam M
ReplyDeleteI like how you used dazzling sun
ReplyDeletewhat does frolic mean
ReplyDeleteIs that realy 100 words
ReplyDeleteNo! it isn't really . I have got 93 words. But my teacher said it is o,k.
DeleteI like the word dazzling
ReplyDeleteThat is a great decribdive peace of writing Cameron I really like it.
ReplyDeleteI love your begining.
ReplyDeleteI like that last line that you used :)
ReplyDeleteI like the start, middle and end lol good work
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