Once upon a time I saw a mud puddle. In fact a very big mud puddle. I went in it and I got stuck and for a moment I thought it was quick mud. It was! Then a bull charged. I ran, but I ran very slowly. The bulls hoof slamed down on me. I felt very, very numb after. It pushed me down into the mud. After I was caked in mud.
By Zayn
One word Awesome! I particularly like the part where you wrote, 'The bulls hoof slamed down on me. I could really picture that happening out in the wilderness
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