Saturday, 11 May 2013

100 WORD CHALLENGE #1 - BY ISABELLA

Two lions trampling over each other.  Two lions with pitch black noses.  Two lions with brown eyes, with deadly giant sharp claws and furry golden manes which shimmer in the sunlight.  They are frolicking in the zoo.  With swishy swaggy tails they frolic around the zoo. It's like they are fighting on the grass, but they are frolicking on the hot grass.  They will not stop frolicking, even if someone tries to give them nice food.  They will never stop, it is too much fun.

By Isabella

4 comments:

  1. Great work Issy

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  2. Hi Isabella I like the bit when you said with there deadly giant sharp claws by Aliya

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  3. Hey Issy - your writing is going great guns. love your description of the lions eyes and noses. Mum XX

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  4. Hi Issy your story is great .I like the bit when you said swishy swaggy tails by jess

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