Wednesday, 7 March 2012

Autumn

Today the sky is grey.  It is freezing outside.  I shake when I go outside, I hate it outside.
Outside leaves are getting swooped into the sky.  When it's really windy there are leaf tornados.  The leaves are prancing and dancing.  It's all so gusty out there.


By Judd

14 comments:

  1. Well done Judd.I was frezzing too.When you said it cloudy and the trees were dancing,that was true

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  2. it was cold out there. By judd

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  3. good job from finn

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  4. AWESOME Judd from fergus

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  5. yes i do hate out side when it is cloudy.And when it is sunny i like outside.

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  6. great work judd from Jackson

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  7. it is really cold on an autumn day i like you're description. from kale.

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  8. Very good decrible words

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  9. i like the word gusty in your comment

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  10. i like the part when it says i shake when i go outside From George

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  11. hi Judd

    I Like your writing.

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  12. i love sunny days because it gives you warmness.And i hate outside because you get wet and cold.from rishabh

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  13. great work judd

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  14. good work judd for the sentensts the sky is grey from naomi

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