I liked it when you said ,you ran it over
I liked that part to.
Hi WilliamGreat to see you are publishing your work. I loved how you used the word 'flattened' to describe the spider as it painted a picture in my mind. A bit sad for the poor spider but it's probably the only way I'd like to meet one! - Mrs Wood :)
Great work william you are awesome FERGUS
good job williamfrom finn
I liked reading it william. I like the bit when you said I forgot to tell you this was in australia
Hi William great job. Grace
awesome story william. great job.
I agre william.