One year ago, I saw the most amazing thing in the world. It was a tarantula. I saw it on the road. Me and Mum ran it over in the car. The tarantula was flattened by the car. I forgot to tell you this...it was in Australia. By William
Hi William Great to see you are publishing your work. I loved how you used the word 'flattened' to describe the spider as it painted a picture in my mind. A bit sad for the poor spider but it's probably the only way I'd like to meet one! - Mrs Wood :)
I liked it when you said ,you ran it over
ReplyDeleteI liked that part to.
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ReplyDeleteGreat to see you are publishing your work. I loved how you used the word 'flattened' to describe the spider as it painted a picture in my mind. A bit sad for the poor spider but it's probably the only way I'd like to meet one! - Mrs Wood :)
Great work william you are awesome FERGUS
ReplyDeletegood job william
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I liked reading it william. I like the bit when you said I forgot to tell you this was in australia
ReplyDeleteHi William great job. Grace
ReplyDeleteawesome story william. great job.
ReplyDeleteI agre william.
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