Tuesday, 19 June 2012

Class Picnic

When Friday came, I yelled, "Hoorah, it's time for Room 10's picnic!"  I kicked off my blankets and opened the curtains (Not noticing the rain.)  I got dressed and opened the door and ran outside.  
DARN!!!  It was raining.  So I went to school very sad, dripping with sadness.
I was frustrated, angry and upset.  "ARRRR!  No picnic!"
In our class I saw the most amazing thing ever.  X-Box, Gameboy, board games and much, much more.  So I quickly unpacked my bag and started to play with all the games.
It was much more fun.  I had an awesome day.  I did not think it would be that much fun.

By Alex
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17 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:12

    i like how alex put in i went to scoohl driping with sadnees

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  2. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:15

    hello alex great story i love the word ARRRR
    by RISHABH

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  3. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:16

    Love the story Alex. I love how you said DARN it`s raining.
    -Jodie-Anne

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  4. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:18

    i love playing x-box gameboy to. by cameron

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  5. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:18

    I loved your words from ella

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  6. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:19

    COOL ALEX FROM FINN

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  7. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:20

    i like that darn it is raining from Jack M

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  8. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:22

    i liked how you said what there was. from olivia

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  9. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:23

    I like the way you said dripping with saddnes naomi

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  10. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:24

    to Alex great work I liked the way you used hoorah by maddie

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  11. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:26

    I LIKED QUICKLY BY JUDD

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  12. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:27

    I like when you said dripping with sadness



    Emma

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  13. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:29

    Alex I like haw you used Not noticing the rain from Tremain

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  14. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:29

    I like the way you yoused lots of good diskrivinge woreds

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  15. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:30

    I like how you used darn!! and frustrated

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  16. Anonymous19 June 2012 at 15:31

    I like how you said darn!!! - from symone

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  17. FClarkson20 June 2012 at 15:08

    Hi Alex. Great story! You have used lots of describing words. I particularly liked how you used the words "dripping with sadness" in a story about the rain ruining your day! I think that would be a great day for you - playing all those games.Perhaps you could have added a bit to the end about how the rain didn't ruin your day after all.
    Love Mum.

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