100 WORD CHALLENGE

Term 1, Week 3 - challenge picture




I see the glittering blue sea, matched with the clear blue sky, with a bit of those candy like clouds. I see the chattering trees with a glint on their leaves. I see the baby birds in their nests, so cute with those fluffy wings of theirs. I see the slithering snakes, having races, to see who is the fastest and the longest. I hear the squawking seagulls arguing about something that we do not know about. It could be who’s going to catch the biggest fish or how big their wings were. There are so many wonders on one tiny island.


In the ocean the fish were flapping their fins so fast through the water, shooting like bullets. The salty sea was splashing up onto the crunchy, golden sand. The coconuts fell from the trees in the bright blue sky. In the sea it was so shallow because of the coral reef. When the coral reef ended it was so deep, no one could touch the bottom of the sea or even dive to the bottom. The fluffy clouds zoom and float in the sky. The sea is so flat like concrete and so quiet too.


Term 2, Week 2 - challenge picture




Once upon a time I saw a mud puddle.  In fact a very big mud puddle.  I went in it and I got stuck and for a moment I thought it was quick mud.  It was!  Then a bull charged.  I ran, but I ran very slowly.  The bulls hoof slamed down on me.  I felt very, very numb after.  It pushed me down into the mud.  After I was caked in mud.

By Zayn

Term 2, Week 1 - challenge picture



A cloud of dust rose, as two over grown cats twist and flip, grapple claws and tangle together.  Their ear splitting roars of agony and anger rip savagely through the dusty silence. Their bright dazzling yellow manes wipe and wind messily.  Their eyes glint orange in the dazzling sun.  Their golden paws sail through the dusty air as they battle.  Their big bodies twist and bend dangerously daring to snap.  Their faces grimace painfully, but they bravely keep on fighting.  They growl with exhaustion, but they want to merely win.  Their handsome tails swish because they are two handsome lions.

By Russell

14 comments:

  1. cool picture

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    1. i liked the description and the photo

      josh

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    2. Hi Russell
      i like your story

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  2. Hi Russell
    This is a terrific piece of writing. The imagery you have chose is very strong and I can see the lions you have created very clearly in my mind. Mr Newton

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    1. Thank you Mr newton for your nice comments Russell

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  3. Wow Russell - your piece of writing is amazing. I particularly loved the way you have used such a rich choice of words. Keep up the fantastic writing - Mrs Wood :)

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  4. Hi Russell this is an awesome piece of writing! Jennifer

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  5. Wow! I know I am late finding your blog but I am so very impressed with your writing Russell and am going to show it to my Year 3 (7/8 years old) next week when we return to school after the Christmas holidays. I am hoping to start a class blog this term and will be following your class blog. Watch out for us from England!

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    1. We have been on holiday but we start back at school next week. We would love you to read our work and we would love to read yours. If you have a blog address we would love to go on and be your blog buddies.

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    2. lauren nico romy4 March 2014 at 05:50

      yo bro thats awsome and you tipe in Foxesclass.weebly.com

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  6. Wow Russell!! This is sensational writing! I hope you don't mind, but I am going to share it with my Year 3 & 4 class tomorrow. Great work!! - Mrs May, Lawrence Area School

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  7. lauren nico romy4 March 2014 at 05:48

    brilliant work we love it!

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  8. nice I love it

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