I see the glittering blue sea, matched with the clear blue sky,
with a bit of those candy like clouds. I see the chattering trees with a glint
on their leaves. I see the baby birds in their nests, so cute with those fluffy
wings of theirs. I see the slithering snakes, having races, to see who is the
fastest and the longest. I hear the squawking seagulls arguing about something
that we do not know about. It could be who’s going to catch the biggest fish or
how big their wings were. There are so many wonders on one tiny island.
In the ocean the fish were flapping their fins so fast through
the water, shooting like bullets. The salty sea was splashing up onto the
crunchy, golden sand. The coconuts fell from the trees in the bright blue sky.
In the sea it was so shallow because of the coral reef. When the coral reef
ended it was so deep, no one could touch the bottom of the sea or even dive to
the bottom. The fluffy clouds zoom and float in the sky. The sea is so flat
like concrete and so quiet too.
Term 2, Week 2 - challenge picture
Once upon a time I saw a mud puddle. In fact a very big mud puddle. I went in it and I got stuck and for a moment I thought it was quick mud. It was! Then a bull charged. I ran, but I ran very slowly. The bulls hoof slamed down on me. I felt very, very numb after. It pushed me down into the mud. After I was caked in mud.
By Zayn
Term 2, Week 1 - challenge picture
A cloud of dust rose, as two over grown cats twist and flip, grapple claws and tangle together. Their ear splitting roars of agony and anger rip savagely through the dusty silence. Their bright dazzling yellow manes wipe and wind messily. Their eyes glint orange in the dazzling sun. Their golden paws sail through the dusty air as they battle. Their big bodies twist and bend dangerously daring to snap. Their faces grimace painfully, but they bravely keep on fighting. They growl with exhaustion, but they want to merely win. Their handsome tails swish because they are two handsome lions.
By Russell
cool picture
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Hi Russell
ReplyDeleteThis is a terrific piece of writing. The imagery you have chose is very strong and I can see the lions you have created very clearly in my mind. Mr Newton
Thank you Mr newton for your nice comments Russell
DeleteWow Russell - your piece of writing is amazing. I particularly loved the way you have used such a rich choice of words. Keep up the fantastic writing - Mrs Wood :)
ReplyDeleteHi Russell this is an awesome piece of writing! Jennifer
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ReplyDeleteWow! I know I am late finding your blog but I am so very impressed with your writing Russell and am going to show it to my Year 3 (7/8 years old) next week when we return to school after the Christmas holidays. I am hoping to start a class blog this term and will be following your class blog. Watch out for us from England!
ReplyDeleteWe have been on holiday but we start back at school next week. We would love you to read our work and we would love to read yours. If you have a blog address we would love to go on and be your blog buddies.
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DeleteWow Russell!! This is sensational writing! I hope you don't mind, but I am going to share it with my Year 3 & 4 class tomorrow. Great work!! - Mrs May, Lawrence Area School
ReplyDeletebrilliant work we love it!
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